I got a couple questions for you I like the video itself, it's clear, it's calm. You're entertaining. I was wondering if there was a reason why the video was scaled so that you couldnt see your inventory. It seems like it was accidently too large and you recorded only part of your screen. Aside from that make sure you try out some video editting stuff. I heard you say you wanted to cut something out if you knew how to do that but you didnt so that leads me to think you havent tried video editting yet?
It's not that difficult to learn (the basics that is) so i'd give that a try meanwhile.